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Rain. (preview)

Sun Jan 18, 2009, 6:31 PM

Rain.

They say ‘when it rains, it pours.’ But really, ‘they’ haven’t got a clue. The rain here is hard and harsh, wiping away with sheer force the filth that is this city. But no matter how hard it rains, or for how long, the filth, the crime, the pain- it never goes away. The sorrow of this city can’t be cleansed.

There is only one moment, here, where the air is pure and clean. And that is right after a storm- the very point where the sky decides this is as clean as it gets. In that one moment, you breathe Life. You breathe the essence of the Earth, her very soul, into you. That one moment is what I live for. That one moment, the only thing that drives me to the lengths I go to survive.



Water splashed up high on my jeans, soaking my runners, as I dashed through the downpour, hands over my head in a vain attempt to keep the rain off. The awnings around me had gaping holes, jagged slashes running the entire length of the mental frames, or were occupied, making both prospects unpleasant. The streets were rough, but those who survived long enough learned how to stay alive. If you had something someone else wanted, then you never slept around strangers. I had been on the streets my entire life. All seventeen years of it. It seemed so young, up in those shiny glass towers that surrounded me, but out here, I was a veteran. A survivor of countless wars. I had thought the streets had made me smarter, made me faster, more clever, but I didn’t know the meanings of any of those things. Not until I met him.



'nouther little preview. this one will actually turn into a chapter story. But right now, it's homework for Creative Writing.

Meet Rainn. Something is about to change his life- and his world- forever.
Anzel Jacinto is bored with his upper-crust life. Then he ran into someone who has the potential to keep him entertained for years to come.
What neither know is how much they have in common, and just how they will effect each other's lives.


Wanna know what happens? Wanna see what my magic fingers can turn out with my own characters?
-chuchkles- I cna almost hear the screams of 'Fuck no!!!Gimmie my Fanfics, STAT!'
well, I'm sorry. The only person likely to get theirs is Sarahpants. everythign else is on Haitus until further notice. Sorry lovelies, but creative genuis has bit me in the ass, and is refusing to let go. So sit back, and enjoy the ride.

Just a note: Rain. will be switching between first, and third person, and between Rainn and Anzel.
and yes, the period is part of the tittle. Tell me whatcha think?

  • Mood: Agony
  • Listening to: This Is What Brothers Are For.(Brothers)
  • Reading: mah homework.
  • Watching: my cat clean himself
  • Eating: cough drops.
  • Drinking: water

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course, the moment I put down Anzel's last name, I changed it. Now I like 'Jaraco' better. whatcha think of it?

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