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A mouthful of thorns. by ~SanzoBrat:iconSanzoBrat:



A mouthful of thorns.

A mouth full of thorns,
A mouth full of lies;
A toothsome snail,
Pigs that can fly.

Riddle me this,
Riddle me that,
Leave me alone,
Don’t abandon me yet.

If you should go,
If you should stay,
Running from sunrise,
Chasing the day.

Bear claws and tumble weeds,
Butterflies and swine,
Diamonds in garbage,
Bird eggs in wine.

This world is confusing,
But don’t run away yet,
Give it a chance,
And better, it will get.

By Jenet Martel
©2008-2009 ~SanzoBrat
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Author's Comments

I was sitting in my chair at my orthodontists, and my wires were off on my braces. So I said to my technition "it feels like a mouthful of thorns." and thus, this was born.
of course, I didn't get to write it down until two hours later. For those who might nto know, "Toothsome" actually means "Tasty" or "delicious"

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:iconsarahpants:
lol delicious snails.
but ugh.
I definetly wouldnt want to get braces :[
when do you get them off?

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You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus
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Ah....this one is interesting, yes indeed. And my half-asleep mind feels like comprehending so~

Confusing indeed, hm? I love how this seems like a list of all the reasons that we should just run away from the world, or reasons why it's so confusing, and then in the end it sort of says "you'll learn to love it, and when you do, you'll really love it."

I wish I could think of more to say to this...It's so good and well-written, and the word-choice is wonderful~ Toothsome...Yay, I learned a new word~!

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heh heh! I love it when you comment! Even half-asleep, you're always so thoughtful!I'm glad for the wonderful feed back!
Gald you learned something! After all, i do try my best! :D

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“What doesn’t kill you requires years of therapy to deal with.” -monkey
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“I like the part where you resign yourself to your fate.”-Alex
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"I'm smarter then a hamster!" - Mom
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this qoute could be you! If you do/say something stupid enough.
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i know. i stuc kit in there because it's like "as if" along wiht the "will never happen" flying pigs.
dunno. some time in the next four months. But i cna chew again! *perks up*

--
“What doesn’t kill you requires years of therapy to deal with.” -monkey
--
“I like the part where you resign yourself to your fate.”-Alex
--
"I'm smarter then a hamster!" - Mom
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this qoute could be you! If you do/say something stupid enough.
:iconsarahpants:
:D Yay! *gives you a cookie*

When you get them off you should take a picture and be like *SPARKLESPARKLE*

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You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus
:iconsanzobrat:
Funny you shoudl do that. My best freind left late, and decided to buy me a cookie on the way to the bus stop.

I should, i should.

OH, Oh, guess what? WE HAVE PHOTOSHOP!!!!!!

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“What doesn’t kill you requires years of therapy to deal with.” -monkey
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“I like the part where you resign yourself to your fate.”-Alex
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"I'm smarter then a hamster!" - Mom
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this qoute could be you! If you do/say something stupid enough.
:iconsarahpants:
haha, omg Im JEALOUS!?

Where's my copy huh huh huh??

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You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus
:iconsanzobrat:
GUESS WHAT?!?!?!?! I was wrong. We don't. CHERYL, YOU LIEEEED TO ME!
*sobs into hands*

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“What doesn’t kill you requires years of therapy to deal with.” -monkey
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“I like the part where you resign yourself to your fate.”-Alex
--
"I'm smarter then a hamster!" - Mom
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this qoute could be you! If you do/say something stupid enough.
:iconsarahpants:
>.> tell her she has impending doom coming upon her very soon.

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You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus

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